پڑھ کر اچھا لگا مگر کیا یہ غزل ہے؟ خیر مجھے تو غزلیں سمجھ میں نہیں آتیں لیکن آپ کا لکھا پورا پڑھ لیا (؛

راحتیں اور بھی ہیں وصل کی راحت کے سوا۔۔۔

اچھا۔۔۔۔

اسي مناسبت سے ايک شعر
تنہائی، ياد، کربِ مسلسل، گھٹن گھٹن
تجھ سے بچھڑ کے پاۓ ہيں کتنے سزا کے روپ

Zabardust janab!!! ghazal to ghazal app ka layout bhi “chaaa” gaya hai !

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such a lovely ghazal… liked it very much.. who’s the poet?

i wonder why you’re carrying 2 commenting systems… u should switch to one… otherwise it’s confusing and keeping track of comments is kinda hectic… even for the commentors especially when a lot is said about a perticular post… liked the design.. very subtle and sweet.
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i posted the comment up above this line… but then it brought me to this page… with the blogger comment template… askin for the word verification.. i have to submit the form again eh :-s commentors might get irritated.. (as i just felt so)

Wassalam, all

I ouldnt comment here …anyways, poet is unknown ……!!!

thanks for liking it all of ya

@fursid . yeah ppl asked about it actually posting cmmnts thru haloscan is easier, but there are some ppl who asked me for blogger commenting, as they thought its easier ……. so may beech may hi stuck hogayiii , between two opinions ……!!!!!

haaaaaaaaaa!

There will always be something that people will complain about. And your life will be miserable :p you should stick to one thing and neend not to stuck b/w other stuff.

@harris: ya, on ur choice hee tu temp chunna hay

@ vl:
Asma | Homepage | 09.22.05 – 6:20 pm | #

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cool!!
VL | Homepage | 09.22.05 – 1:18 pm | #

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اسما ٹیمپلیٹ بہت خوبصورت ہے۔ اور رنگ بھی میری پسند کے ہیں۔

ویسے تنہائی اور اداسی کی وجہ سمجھ نہیں ائی۔ البتہ ایک مصرع شیر کرنا چاہوں گا۔ خاموشی اور تنہائی کے حوالے سے۔

خاموشی گفتگو ہے ، بے زبانی زباں میری
ol’ pal Harris | Homepage | 09.22.05 – 1:07 am | #

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@FM: lolz … good one

@shirazi:

@moiz: thats y its here

@RP: ooooops so why did ya peeked into NJ’s link
Asma | Homepage | 09.22.05 – 1:01 am | #

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im not NJ… why do u have me linked as NJ… *insert confused look here*
royalty personified | Homepage | 09.21.05 – 10:18 pm | #

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Very nice template. its a good colou combination. i like it.
Moiz | Homepage | 09.20.05 – 8:40 pm | #

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Nice read.
Shirazi | Homepage | 09.20.05 – 12:46 pm | #

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Nice poem…

Some of my own version of this poetry.

Koi Gulistaan ho,
Jis main Kaantay na ho,

Koi Musaffir ho,
Jiska Koi Thikana na ho,

Koi Insaan ho,
Jo Doosraun key liye Haiwaan na ho
…how it is …

I know i am not good in shairi and this sorta stuff..but they just came in my mind in an instant .

with regards
FM
Fahad Majeed | Homepage | 09.20.05 – 2:30 am | #

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@zenia: poet ka pata nahi

@Mera Pakistan: Great lines

@Raheel: yuppy

@GH:from my diary … wrote it from somewhere … not very sure about!
Asma | Homepage | 09.20.05 – 12:58 am | #

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nice poem

from where u got it?
green head | Homepage | 09.19.05 – 7:47 pm | #

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beautiful skin yaar!
Raheel | Homepage | 09.19.05 – 2:39 am | #

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اسي مناسبت سے ايک شعر
تنہائی، ياد، کربِ مسلسل، گھٹن گھٹن
تجھ سے بچھڑ کے پاۓ ہيں کتنے سزا کے روپ
ميرا & | 09.18.05 – 6:12 pm | #

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wow such a nice poem……..who is the poet…..

bas yaar aaj kal bohat buzy hoon update ka bi time nahi melta…..
zenia | 09.18.05 – 1:22 am | #