Comments on: اثراتِ فراق لمحوں میں جاتے نہیں http://asma.eomag.com/377/ .... boulevArd of dreAms~ Mon, 15 Mar 2010 04:56:19 +0800 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.3 hourly 1 By: Asma http://asma.eomag.com/377/comment-page-1/#comment-27103 Asma Wed, 24 Jan 2007 19:49:22 +0000 http://asma.eomag.com/377/#comment-27103 nice one -- that silly one be chalti :) nice one — that silly one be chalti :)

]]> By: Sidhusaaheb http://asma.eomag.com/377/comment-page-1/#comment-27062 Sidhusaaheb Mon, 22 Jan 2007 19:33:05 +0000 http://asma.eomag.com/377/#comment-27062 It was very silly! :D Meanwhile, here's some good stuff from a good poet (which I am not!): Aaj ke daur meiN ai dost ye manzar kyoN hai zakhm har sar pe, har haath meiN pathhar kyon hai Jab haqeeqat hai ke har zarre meiN Tu rehta hai phir kahiN masalaa-e-masjid kahiN mandir kyoN hai Apnaa anjaam toh maaluum hai sabko phir bhi apni nazroN meiN har insaan sikandar kyon hai Zindagi jeene ke qaabil hi nahi ab 'Qateel' warna har aaNkh mein ashkoN ka samandar kyoN hai It was very silly! :D

Meanwhile, here’s some good stuff from a good poet (which I am not!):

Aaj ke daur meiN ai dost ye manzar kyoN hai

zakhm har sar pe, har haath meiN pathhar kyon hai

Jab haqeeqat hai ke har zarre meiN Tu rehta hai

phir kahiN masalaa-e-masjid kahiN mandir kyoN hai

Apnaa anjaam toh maaluum hai sabko phir bhi

apni nazroN meiN har insaan sikandar kyon hai

Zindagi jeene ke qaabil hi nahi ab ‘Qateel’

warna har aaNkh mein ashkoN ka samandar kyoN hai

]]> By: Asma http://asma.eomag.com/377/comment-page-1/#comment-27061 Asma Mon, 22 Jan 2007 18:47:56 +0000 http://asma.eomag.com/377/#comment-27061 <b>Sidhusaaheb</b> Lolz I'm sure that piece wud be gud enough too :) ... wana share ??? <b>Dr FM</b> Lolz accha aik hi mjuda'aa uthaya hay ... hmm waisay kabhi saalon may aik aadh daffa hi mutla aur maqta wali ghazal likhi jaati hay mujh say ... pata nahi log kaisay likh laitay hain :/ <b>Shari</b> Thnx and ooops :) Sidhusaaheb Lolz I’m sure that piece wud be gud enough too :) … wana share ???

Dr FM Lolz accha aik hi mjuda’aa uthaya hay … hmm waisay kabhi saalon may aik aadh daffa hi mutla aur maqta wali ghazal likhi jaati hay mujh say … pata nahi log kaisay likh laitay hain :/

Shari Thnx and ooops :)

]]> By: Shari http://asma.eomag.com/377/comment-page-1/#comment-27058 Shari Mon, 22 Jan 2007 13:24:54 +0000 http://asma.eomag.com/377/#comment-27058 آپ کی یہ خوبصورت غزل پڑھ کر واہ واہ کیئے بغیر ہم رہ پاتے نہیں You are very good at poetry keep it up. And no i am not a doc ; i am in Air force آپ کی یہ خوبصورت غزل پڑھ کر

واہ واہ کیئے بغیر ہم رہ پاتے نہیں

You are very good at poetry keep it up.

And no i am not a doc ; i am in Air force

]]> By: Dr Farrukh Malik http://asma.eomag.com/377/comment-page-1/#comment-27050 Dr Farrukh Malik Mon, 22 Jan 2007 03:44:51 +0000 http://asma.eomag.com/377/#comment-27050 Bohat Khoob,bil khusoos matlay or maqtay ma aik hi mud'da uthaya hai aap na, lagta ha waqai ashkoon ka ik toofan mojzan raha hoga, tesra shar 'dil ka nihan khano ma...' is particularly very good... Bohat Khoob,bil khusoos matlay or maqtay ma aik hi mud’da uthaya hai aap na, lagta ha waqai ashkoon ka ik toofan mojzan raha hoga, tesra shar ‘dil ka nihan khano ma…’ is particularly very good…

]]> By: Sidhusaaheb http://asma.eomag.com/377/comment-page-1/#comment-27040 Sidhusaaheb Sun, 21 Jan 2007 18:57:42 +0000 http://asma.eomag.com/377/#comment-27040 I've tried my hand at poetry only twice in my life. One was a piece in English for a very dear friend, whom you know as Ra (http://rahuldoes.blogspot.com) and he was kind enough to appreciate it. The other one was a fun piece in Urd-lish (Urdu+English) for some one who didn't appreciate it at all! I’ve tried my hand at poetry only twice in my life. One was a piece in English for a very dear friend, whom you know as Ra (http://rahuldoes.blogspot.com) and he was kind enough to appreciate it. The other one was a fun piece in Urd-lish (Urdu+English) for some one who didn’t appreciate it at all!

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