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Revisiting Ghalib …

Comments (21)

ghDecember 19th, 2008 at 2:09 am

pehla sher to rickshon per likha hota hay.

Saad IbrahimDecember 19th, 2008 at 3:50 am

:S

محمد وارثDecember 19th, 2008 at 2:37 pm

لا جواب اشعار ہیں، بہت خوب!

ExquisiteDecember 19th, 2008 at 5:50 pm

gh is so right
have seen on many rishkass myself

SidhusaahebDecember 19th, 2008 at 8:05 pm

laazim tha ki dekho mera rasta koee din aur
tanha gaye kyoN? ab raho tanha koee din aur

mit jaayega sar, gar tera patthar na ghisega
hooN dar pe tere naasiyaa_farsa koee din aur

aaye ho kal aur aaj hee kehte ho ki jaaooN
maana ki hamesha naheeN, achchaa, koee din aur

jaate huve kahte ho, qayaamat ko milenge
kya khoob! qayaamat ka hai goya koee din aur?

haaN ‘ei falak-e-peer, javaaN tha abhee ‘aarif’
kya tera bigaRata jo na marta koee din aur?

tum maah-e-shab-e-char_dahum the; mere ghar ke
phir kyoN na raha ghar ka woh naqsha koee din aur?

tum kaun se ‘eise the; khare daad-o-sitad ke?
karta malak_ul_maut taqaaza koee din aur?

mujhse tumhaiN nafrat sahee, ‘nayyar’ se laRaayee
bachchoN ka bhee dekha na tamaasha koee din aur?

guzree na baharhaal yah muddat KHushee-naaKHush
karna tha, javaaN_marg! guzaara koee din aur

naadaaN ho jo kehte ho ki kyoN jeete ho ‘GHalib’
qismat meiN hai marne ki tamanna koee din aur?

mEDecember 20th, 2008 at 10:33 am

GH Ghalib ki bay-izati … >_<

Saad LOL, kiya hua?

Ghalib kay jo hain :)

Exquisite LOL @ rishkass :P

Sidhusaheb Shukriya for sharing :)

ghDecember 20th, 2008 at 4:15 pm

http://www.howtocreate.co.uk/perfectPopups.html

how many bucks you have made so far?

utpDecember 20th, 2008 at 7:00 pm

hmmm…I dont think I actually got these two…could somebody explain…?

AnonymousDecember 20th, 2008 at 7:23 pm

Got the first shair and it was amazing, but it was hard to get the second one, coz of hard words :S yeah any explanations ??

TheScribblerDecember 20th, 2008 at 11:50 pm

Translation provided on demand:

“Going away you say we’d meet on the Day of Judgment;
Bravo! So, the Day of Judgment is some other (not today)??”

I know I’m intelligent; don’t comment in praising me…
*struts*:p

TheScribblerDecember 20th, 2008 at 11:53 pm

*grammatical mistake realized* :(

SalmanDecember 21st, 2008 at 12:00 am

you still love this ghazal :) I can never remember my favorite ash`aar/ghazal for this long..

SAWJDecember 21st, 2008 at 2:46 am

Rickshaws pe kabhi kabhar buhat fit shair likhay hotay hain.

Saad IbrahimDecember 21st, 2008 at 3:55 am

kiya pata Ghalib wahi sey uthata ho :P

sirasDecember 21st, 2008 at 5:45 pm

I love the first shair it’s so beautiful, and even the one shared by Sidhusaaheb! Amazing, thanks for sharing! :)

ZiosDecember 22nd, 2008 at 8:53 am

:-)

Walking AwayDecember 22nd, 2008 at 4:23 pm

Didn’t get the second shair :S

mEDecember 23rd, 2008 at 4:55 am

gh :(

utp Err… really?

Anonymous :s

TS SHukar hay someone at last ;)

Welcome to the blog !

Salman Yup still do .. forever lone :D

SAWJ haw hayay!

Saad Broken my heart </3

siras Yayy :)

Zios :D

W A Haa!

I’ll do a post on these verses some other day ;) Ghalib ki bay izati bardasht nahi hoti :P

Saad IbrahimDecember 23rd, 2008 at 4:56 am

Sorry! :P want elfi to fix it? :D
bad joke :S

zeenatDecember 24th, 2008 at 1:10 am

Good show!!

I recently started a blog of mine. I would love it if you would add me to your blog roll and vice verse. http://luscious69.blogspot.com

mEDecember 26th, 2008 at 10:33 pm

Saad Lolz ~ I’ll buy thanks :P

zeenat welcome to the blog will visit urs too :) And ooops blogroll urra di :P

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